Evaluation of my oral presentation

EVALUATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATION!

PRESENTATION:
I use a power point some images. 
I spend 55 seconds.

BODY LENGUAGE:
I watched the public but I don't move.
I don't read.

STRUCTURE:
I organize my ideas in order.

CONTENT:
The information is correct but short.

LANGUAGE:
The grammar are correct.
The vocabulary are rich, I use a dictionary.

PHONETICS:
I pronunce all the words properly, I use a dictionary.
I am fluent.

MY FINAL MARK IS: 7

What have you done well? I have well the pronunciation.
What do you need to improve? The grammar.